Traditional Animation 30sec Storyboard

It's actually 38.2seconds according to my planed timing, which may or may not be very off, seeing as I'm doing this for the first time
If I don't screw up this'll be my very first full animation, yay! I'd usually not upload storyboards, but this is done rather detailed for various reasons (I'm killing a lot of birds with this stone ;D), hence I thought I might share~
Critiques or tips that might help for the upcoming animation are VERY welcome.

Oh, and in case anyone gets confused with the story: this is only sequence 07 out of 13. The other sequences are done by different people.

Greetings and Welcomes
Kojote Out.