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Finally finished!
I must say I really didn't see that coming, since I was rather unhappy with this piece as soon as I tried to color it. I'm still really dissatisfied, but I guess it's still okay enough to upload! I spend a LOT of time on the body of this one and that's the only thing I'm genuinely happy with.
That being said: I'm sorry Nesu for ruining your character! ;__; I really really really tried to make this look awesome for you and just like you always pictured her, but I probably already went downhill with those clothes of hers (brought to you by "IN UR FACE!" (tm). Because violence is fashion now). I hope it's at least some kind of a comfort to you, that I learned a LOT from this!
Red eyed black belongs to
WIP
other works feat. *Nesuki's characters 
I must say I really didn't see that coming, since I was rather unhappy with this piece as soon as I tried to color it. I'm still really dissatisfied, but I guess it's still okay enough to upload! I spend a LOT of time on the body of this one and that's the only thing I'm genuinely happy with.
That being said: I'm sorry Nesu for ruining your character! ;__; I really really really tried to make this look awesome for you and just like you always pictured her, but I probably already went downhill with those clothes of hers (brought to you by "IN UR FACE!" (tm). Because violence is fashion now). I hope it's at least some kind of a comfort to you, that I learned a LOT from this!
Red eyed black belongs to
WIP
other works feat. *Nesuki's characters Image size
3625x5775px 6.14 MB
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactFirst off, I must admit I really do love this piece, the expression is just priceless and you have the body in great proportion.
I will write this from top to bottom, starting with the hair. You have done an amazing job with the shading and coloring and the curls look adorable and frame her face nicely. The white fringe bit could have been done better as it almost seems that you added it to not have to draw the eye because it looks- for lack of better word- "fake". This is to say that it doesn't seem like real hair because of it's thickness. This could just be my personal opinion, but I think this piece would benefit from the face being the full attraction. The face is also absolutely beautiful as the level of detail stretches down to her neck, collar bones and chest.
The coat is simply brilliant, the detail in folds and shading has a "grunge" appearance to it, it fits her form and the physicality and helps to establish her character as a true beater. I love the low riding jean shorts, the detail at the bottom of them is brilliant. The gloves are wonderfully done and only serve more for her character. From the shorts up (including them), I really do love the piece and there are only very minor improvements to make.
I would suggest the breasts are a bit to squashed together , as I would expect more spacing in between for their size, this could just be the angle of the position.
The level of detail on the stomach is gorgeous and rough just like the skin on her chest, you seem to have softened it a bit too much on the legs and thus it loses some of it's impact it previously held.
The same goes with the boots, the detail in them is quite lacking and in need of improvements as the colors seem to merge together too much.
The baseball bat is done very well and you've done a great job putting emphasis on the metallic quality with the highlights.
Overall, a great piece only in need of two or three improvements and an amazing character design. I hope you will try to put more detail into this piece and other work.
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